Autobiography-2 (Draft one)
Autobiography-2 (Draft one)
The first day which I entered the junior high school, my teacher chose a monitor who was me. When I was a monitor, I had to do many things and help teacher do many things. One day my teacher found me and other classmates to make up a team to participate a contest which was台灣網界博覽會. Our designated topic is talking about a person who found and knows many fossil. We had many field trips, because we had to interview and explore in person. In these trips, we saw many different fossils. We also went fossil hunting, but we didn’t find anything. This hard job spent a lot of time and strength. This was really a hard work, but we still accomplished this work. And we won 特優 award in Taian and 佳作 award in the national. About these duties, I learned about cooperating each other are very important and got many experience. After the Joint Entrance Examination for Senior High Schools, I was admitted to National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School of the Department of Applied Foreign Language. I like English than other subjects. So, I chose this department. These are actually good experiences in my life.In the near future, I hope I can make great progress in my schoolwork, strengthen my English communication ability and pass an intermediate level of lttc. In the future, I hope I can get a good grade to pass the entrance examination to colleges, and get into a great technical university. To have my dream come true, I will do my best.

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I learned about cooperating each other are very important and got many experience.
that cooperating with each other is very ....
這個我不會改ㄟ
可是我還是覺得這個句子很怪...
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wow, you are so 厲害.
who found and knows ..時太不一致
because前不用加豆號
I learned (that)cooperate with others is very important ,and I got many experience from it.我覺得是這樣但你不用ㄧ定要寫我改的可以去問金龍
你可以多寫有關高中的事物
I hope I can make great progress in my schoolwork,and strengthen my English communication ability and pass an intermediate
good job!
" I learned about cooperating each other are very important and got many experience."should be "...that cooperating...experiences"
to participate a contest... participate 後面加 in
我都不知道你這麼厲害的說
1.participate in
2.In the last paragraph, you can talk more about your futrue
That's all!
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