Autobiography-1 (Draft two)
Autobiography-1 (Draft two)
My name is Hsin-Wen Hung. I am a seventeen-year-old easygoing girl. I was born in Tainan County in 1990. There are five members in my family. My mother is a housewife. She doesn't work because her health is not good. But, she is very good at cooking. My father is a worker in a personal company. So, my father has to support all my family's economy. But they also offer everything which we need and pay much attention to us. There are three children in my family. I am the first child. Now, I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. My sister is in the third grade in junior high school. She is not good at studying, but she is attentive to do something. My brother is in the fifth grade in elementary school. He is interested in playing computer games. I am lucky to be brought up in a considerate family.
I like to watch movies, play volleyball and badminton with my friends in my leisure time. Watching the western movies can help me strengthen my listening comprehension's ability and learn some words easily. It's also can make contact with my friends. Playing volleyball and badminton can train up our cohesion and unspoken consensus. And exercise also can make me become healthy. These avocations help me relieve my pressure and let me become carefree.
My name is Hsin-Wen Hung. I am a seventeen-year-old easygoing girl. I was born in Tainan County in 1990. There are five members in my family. My mother is a housewife. She doesn't work because her health is not good. But, she is very good at cooking. My father is a worker in a personal company. So, my father has to support all my family's economy. But they also offer everything which we need and pay much attention to us. There are three children in my family. I am the first child. Now, I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. My sister is in the third grade in junior high school. She is not good at studying, but she is attentive to do something. My brother is in the fifth grade in elementary school. He is interested in playing computer games. I am lucky to be brought up in a considerate family.
I like to watch movies, play volleyball and badminton with my friends in my leisure time. Watching the western movies can help me strengthen my listening comprehension's ability and learn some words easily. It's also can make contact with my friends. Playing volleyball and badminton can train up our cohesion and unspoken consensus. And exercise also can make me become healthy. These avocations help me relieve my pressure and let me become carefree.
posted by 薪雯 at 6:28 AM
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My name is Hsin-Wen Hung, a seventeen-year-old easygoing girl. I was born in Tainan County in 1990, and there are five members in my family. My mother is a housewife, and she doesn't work because her health is not good enough. However, she is very good at cooking. My father is a worker in a personal company, and he has to support my family. Also, they offer everything which we need and pay much attention to us. There are three children in my family. I am the oldest child, and now I am studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. My sister is in the third grade in junior high school. She is not good at studying, but she is attentive. My brother is in the fifth grade in elementary school. He is interested in playing computer games. I am lucky to be brought up in such a considerate family.
I am fond of watching movies, playing volleyball and badminton with my friends in my leisure time. Watching the western movies can help me strengthen my listening comprehension's ability and learn new vocabularies easily. It's also can make contact with my friends. Besides, playing volleyball and badminton can train up our cohesion and unspoken consensus. In addition, exercise can make me become healthy. These hobbies help me relieve my pressure and become carefree.
* What does it mean?
--> It's also can make contact with my friends.
* 多使用"轉折語氣詞"。
它還可以跟朋友做聯繫
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