How brave Tom is

How brave Tom is ? (Draft One)

Today is a sunny day. Some children want to eat apples, but they don't have any money to buy. Fortunately, they see an apple tree. So, they bet who can climb the tree and get apples. This boy, Tom, is in order to show how brave he is. So , he volunteers to challenge this bet. When he climbs on the top of tree, he is so proud that he drops from the tree into a ceramic water jar. His friends see the condition and feel panic-stricken. At the moment, one of his friends, John, thinks a method for helping Tom. And then, John calls another friend, Jake, to help him move a big stone. On the way of moving a stone, Jack asks John that why do they need to move the big stone? John answers that because he wants to try to break this jar with a big stone. Finally, they do a good job. And, the jar has a big hole. So , Tom is relieve in a bad dilemma by their helping.