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TV programs
It's important to choose programs carefully. Although television is the most important channel which provides us information and entertainment, it also has some disadvantage. Some of these programs which are full of violent and lust have a harmful influence on teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to our eyesight. Therefore, we should choose programs which are helpful to our bodies and mind. The most important is not to be a tellyholic.
Computer
Computer plays an important role in our daily life. They can help students hand in their homework quickly and send information in time. As long as you tune on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself that don't sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of parents don't like children too depend on the computer. Especially, it wastes time of discussing in bulletin board.
It's important to choose programs carefully. Although television is the most important channel which provides us information and entertainment, it also has some disadvantage. Some of these programs which are full of violent and lust have a harmful influence on teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to our eyesight. Therefore, we should choose programs which are helpful to our bodies and mind. The most important is not to be a tellyholic.
Computer
Computer plays an important role in our daily life. They can help students hand in their homework quickly and send information in time. As long as you tune on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself that don't sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of parents don't like children too depend on the computer. Especially, it wastes time of discussing in bulletin board.
posted by 薪雯 at 8:32 PM
6 Comments:
第一篇
disadvantage可數
violent是形容詞不是名詞
第二篇
most of parents
of 不用寫
too depend
like 加Ving 或to V
too 可能打錯了吧
"Spending too much time watching TV does harm to our eyesight" if I were you, I would change it into "...on watching..."
"However, be sure to remind yourself that don't sit in front of the computer for a long time."
*that+R.C* Check out again!
Moreover,it shouldn't be that"Most of parents don't like children too depend on the computer." Think twice.
it also has some disadvantage
disadvantages
disadvantage要加s
violent→violence
tune→turn
Bigone 都說哩
Spending too much time watching* TV does harm to our eyesight.
用on watching TV....
don't like children too depend on the computer.
like 後面加to or Ving
Spending too much time watching TV... 我覺得watchin TV前要加上 on
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