Tips for staying healthy (Draft one)
Tips for staying healthy (Draft one)
What can we do to keep ourselves healthy? There are three tips for staying healthy. Firstly, we should eat the right food and have a balanced diet. For example, eggs are good for us because they have a lot of protein in them which helps us grow. On the contrary, sweets and candies are bad for our teeth. Sugar in them can rot our teeth. And too much sugar will also make our fat. Secondly, we should take exercise regularly. On this society, people are too busy on work to take exercise. We should take triweekly exercise at least. Finally, we must keep in good mood anytime. Keep in good mood can keep tiredness away. If we keep in good mood, we don’t have a lot of pressure and nervousness. All of these tips can help us to stay healthy.
posted by 薪雯 at 9:08 AM
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they have a lot of protein in them which helps us grow
我建議
there are a lot of protein in the eggs which ....
make our fat我建議
make us become fat
people are too busy on...
busy +Ving
people are too busy working....
keep in "a" good mood
we don’t have a lot of pressure and nervousness
這句較口語的意味
人be under pressure of.........
"And too much sugar will also make our fat." should be "...make us become fat..."
And too much sugar will also make our fat.
And too much sugar will also make us fat.
I think it is better.
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