Wednesday, February 28, 2007

Diary

Diary
Today is January2 of the lunar calendar, the day is that my parents have to go home which is married women's parents'. My grandmother's daughters go to my grandparents' house to cook ahead. My grandparents' house is near my home. When I reach my grandparents' house, I found my family is the last to be there and every foods are prepared. So we start to eat. My grandmother also invites her neighbors and friends to eat. Everybody eat happily, and so do I. After eating, my grandmother proposes playing poker cards. Finally, I am the winner. YA. Today is my lucky day.

5 Comments:

Blogger Debie said...

"Today is January2 "should be"...second";well,did you win money or it's just for fun?

7:23 PM  
Blogger Penny said...

every foods ..
"all the food" is better.
every後面要加單數型..
如果我沒記錯的話..

7:24 PM  
Blogger Estella said...

invites her neighbors and friends to eat

to eat 改成to join us會比較順一點!

7:25 PM  
Blogger 林小雞 said...

時態要注意一下!!:)

7:40 PM  
Blogger Sally Sun said...

January 2nd

時態注意

After eating
我覺得After finishing....比較好

4:07 AM  

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