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My relatives invite me and my sister to go to kaohsiung. We accept this invitation. When I arrive 新新市場, I feel there become downward. I recall before whenever I go to there, there are many people. But now, there are become less and less people. And then, we went to 新崛江, there are too many people to shopping. After shopping, we went to my relative’s house. They prepare much delicious food for dinner. They have a dog that is very fat and cute. After dinner, we decide to visit my relative’s daughter’s new house. Because she got married lately, she has a new house with her husband. Her house is very big for two people living. And then, it time for go back to Tainan. It is such a fun day.

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I don't know what it means-When I arrive 新新市場, I feel there become downward. I recall before whenever I go to there, there are many people.
就是我覺得那個地方已經沒落了。之前去都很多人
"there are become less and less people."
There are two verbs in your sentence.
時態有點不一致
要檢查一下吧!!
(一下子現在 一下子過去="=)
My relatives invite me and my sister to go to kaohsiung. We accept this invitation我覺得這句這樣即可
My relatives invite me and my sister to go to kaohsiung,and we accept this invitation
注意時態
there are become less 兩個動詞
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