How brave Tom is
How brave Tom is? (Draft Two)
Today is a sunny day. Some children want to eat apples, but they don't have any money to buy them. Fortunately, they see an apple tree. So, they bet who can climb the tree and get apples. This boy, Tom, who is in order to show how brave he is. So, he volunteers to challenge this bet. When he climbs on the top of tree, he is so proud that he drops from the tree into a ceramic water jar. His friends see the condition and feel panic-stricken. At the moment, one of his friends, John, thinks a method for helping Tom. And then, John calls another friend, Jake, to help him move a big stone. On the way of moving a stone, Jack asks John that why do they need to move the big stone? John answers that because he wants to try to break this jar with a big stone. Finally, they do a good job. And, the jar has a big hole. So, Tom is relieved in a bad dilemma by their help.
Today is a sunny day. Some children want to eat apples, but they don't have any money to buy them. Fortunately, they see an apple tree. So, they bet who can climb the tree and get apples. This boy, Tom, who is in order to show how brave he is. So, he volunteers to challenge this bet. When he climbs on the top of tree, he is so proud that he drops from the tree into a ceramic water jar. His friends see the condition and feel panic-stricken. At the moment, one of his friends, John, thinks a method for helping Tom. And then, John calls another friend, Jake, to help him move a big stone. On the way of moving a stone, Jack asks John that why do they need to move the big stone? John answers that because he wants to try to break this jar with a big stone. Finally, they do a good job. And, the jar has a big hole. So, Tom is relieved in a bad dilemma by their help.
posted by 薪雯 at 8:53 PM
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How brave Tom is!
Today is a sunny day. Some children want to eat apples, but they don't have any money to buy them. Fortunately, they see an apple tree. So, they bet who can climb the tree and get apples. This boy, Tom, wants to show how brave he is, so he volunteers to accept this bet. When he climbs on the top of tree, he is so careless that he drops from the tree into a ceramic water jar. His friends see it and feel panic-stricken. At the moment, one of his friends, John, thinks a method to help Tom. And then, John calls another friend, Jake, to help him move a big stone. Jack asks John that why do they need to move the big stone. John answers that because he wants to try to break this jar with a big stone. Finally, they do a good job, and the jar is broken with a big hole. So, Tom is relieved in a bad dilemma by their help.
It is right to use the past tense.
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