Translation (Draft two)

TV programs

It's important to choose programs carefully. Although television is the most important channel which provides us information and entertainment, it also has some disadvantages. Some of these programs which are full of violence and lust have a harmful influence on teenagers. Spending too much time on watching TV does harm to our eyesight. Therefore, we should choose programs which are helpful to our bodies and mind. The most important is not to be a couch potato.

Computer

Computer plays an important role in our daily life. They can not only help students hand in their homework quickly but also send information in time. As long as you tune on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself that don't sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of parents don't like children to depend on the computer too much. Especially, it wastes time of discussing in bulletin board.

Translation (Draft one)

TV programs
It's important to choose programs carefully. Although television is the most important channel which provides us information and entertainment, it also has some disadvantage. Some of these programs which are full of violent and lust have a harmful influence on teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to our eyesight. Therefore, we should choose programs which are helpful to our bodies and mind. The most important is not to be a tellyholic.

Computer
Computer plays an important role in our daily life. They can help students hand in their homework quickly and send information in time. As long as you tune on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself that don't sit in front of the computer for a long time. Most of parents don't like children too depend on the computer. Especially, it wastes time of discussing in bulletin board.

How brave Tom is

How brave Tom is? (Draft Two)
Today is a sunny day. Some children want to eat apples, but they don't have any money to buy them. Fortunately, they see an apple tree. So, they bet who can climb the tree and get apples. This boy, Tom, who is in order to show how brave he is. So, he volunteers to challenge this bet. When he climbs on the top of tree, he is so proud that he drops from the tree into a ceramic water jar. His friends see the condition and feel panic-stricken. At the moment, one of his friends, John, thinks a method for helping Tom. And then, John calls another friend, Jake, to help him move a big stone. On the way of moving a stone, Jack asks John that why do they need to move the big stone? John answers that because he wants to try to break this jar with a big stone. Finally, they do a good job. And, the jar has a big hole. So, Tom is relieved in a bad dilemma by their help.

How brave Tom is

How brave Tom is ? (Draft One)

Today is a sunny day. Some children want to eat apples, but they don't have any money to buy. Fortunately, they see an apple tree. So, they bet who can climb the tree and get apples. This boy, Tom, is in order to show how brave he is. So , he volunteers to challenge this bet. When he climbs on the top of tree, he is so proud that he drops from the tree into a ceramic water jar. His friends see the condition and feel panic-stricken. At the moment, one of his friends, John, thinks a method for helping Tom. And then, John calls another friend, Jake, to help him move a big stone. On the way of moving a stone, Jack asks John that why do they need to move the big stone? John answers that because he wants to try to break this jar with a big stone. Finally, they do a good job. And, the jar has a big hole. So , Tom is relieve in a bad dilemma by their helping.

Tips for staying healthy (Draft two)

Tips for staying healthy (Draft two)
What can we do to keep ourselves healthy? There are three tips for staying healthy. Firstly, we should eat the right food and have a balanced diet. For example, eggs are good for us because they have a lot of protein in them which helps us grow. On the contrary, sweets and candies are bad for our teeth. Sugar in them can rot our teeth. And too much sugar will also make us become fat. Secondly, we should take exercise regularly. On this society, people are too busy working to take exercise. We should take triweekly exercise at least. Finally, we must keep in a good mood anytime. Keep in a good mood can keep tiredness away. If we keep in a good mood, we don't have a lot of pressure and nervousness. All of these tips can help us to stay healthy well.