An unforgettable experience (Draft two)

An unforgettable experience (Draft two)

I had an unforgettable experience occurring in my life of elementary school. I think it happened far off the beam. At that time, my mother brought two people who comprised my sister and me to my grandmother's house by scooter which is 50c.c at about 30 km/hr. It should be very safe, but out of sudden, my mother didn't take notice to the rough road that had a small hole as passing through, so I fell from the scooter and lay prone on the ground. After falling, I though my mother would stop riding and pick me up. Nevertheless, when I raised my head, I discovered that my mother didn't know that I dropped downward. So she continued riding her scooter. At the moment, I felt very panic, so I didn't know what to do. Fortunately, a passerby who rode motorbike passing through me saw that and started calling out my mom. When my mother heard that, she stopped riding and returned to pick me up. Few days after, my whole body was sore and painful. However, it remained funny and far off the beam on thinking of it.

A unforgettable experience (Draft one)

An unforgettable experience (Draft one)

I had an unforgettable experience occurring in my life of elementary school. I think it happened far off the beam. At that time, my mother brought two people who included my sister and me to my grandmother's house by motorcycle which is 50c.c at about 30 km/hr. It should be very safe, but out of sudden, my mother didn't take notice to the rough road that had a small hole as passing through, so I fell from the motorcycle and lay prone on the ground. After falling, I though my mother would stop riding and pick me up. Nevertheless, when I raised my head, I discovered that my mother didn't know that I dropped downward. So she continued riding her motorcycle. At the moment, I felt very panic, so I didn't know what to do. Fortunately, a passerby who rode motorbike passing through me saw that and started calling out my mom. When my mother heard that, she stopped riding and returned to pick me up. Few days after, my whole body was sore and painful. However, it remained funny and far off the beam on thinking of it.

A dream i had (Draft two)

A Dream I Had (Draft two)

Sometimes people have a real or strange dream. Recently, I had an unusual dream. In my dream, I was a lazy girl, so I always wished that I could have a servant to do all my works. Suddenly, a person who was exactly likes me appearing in my house. When I asked her why she emerged from my house, she replied she was appointed to help me by a mysterious universe. I was very happy to hear about that, so I didn't want to realize what the universe was. So I started demanding her do many works, such as washed dishes, cleaned my house, and even went to school instead of me. I had deeply depended on her since she appeared. But someday, she was out of control and started ruining everything. And then, she was found that she was a human cloning by nation scientists. Whereas so far our world didn't bourgeon a human cloning successfully, she was taken away due to some experiments on her. After she disappeared, I didn't know how to lead my life. As I began thinking about what to do, I woke up all at once. In the end, I realize a saying which is “God helps those who help themselves.”