My bedroom (Draft one)
My bedroom
My bedroom is a small place. Like most rooms, it's a rectangle. When you enter the door, the first thing you see is a messy desk in front of the door. Because I always throw everything there. The right wall is lined with desk and bookcase. The bookcase is next to the desk in the right corner. I put a lot of books in this bookcase. And the audio is on the top of bookcase. I usually listen to the music with it. On the back wall is a cabinet. In this cabinet have my alarm clock, telephone, and some books etc. A single bed is in the left corner on the left wall. The window is in the left next to the door. The air conditioning is above the window. The clothes stand and a fan are between the bed and window. The fan is in the right of the clothes stand.
My bedroom is a small place. Like most rooms, it's a rectangle. When you enter the door, the first thing you see is a messy desk in front of the door. Because I always throw everything there. The right wall is lined with desk and bookcase. The bookcase is next to the desk in the right corner. I put a lot of books in this bookcase. And the audio is on the top of bookcase. I usually listen to the music with it. On the back wall is a cabinet. In this cabinet have my alarm clock, telephone, and some books etc. A single bed is in the left corner on the left wall. The window is in the left next to the door. The air conditioning is above the window. The clothes stand and a fan are between the bed and window. The fan is in the right of the clothes stand.
So, my bedroom remains a little space to walk.

9 Comments:
沒什麼問題
air conditioner is ok
When you enter the door, the first thing you see is a messy desk in front of the door.
Because I always throw everything there
我認為Because在此不能大寫阿沒有原因在此句呀
應該When you enter the door, the first thing you see is a messy desk in front of the door because I always throw everything there.
in the right corner
我覺得
at the right corner比較ok
In this cabinet have my alarm clock, telephone, and some books
我會用
there are a alarm clock....in this cabinet
The window is in the left next to the door
應該是用
The window is on the left next to the door
The air conditioning
penny 改了
The fan is in the right of the clothes stand
The fan is on the right side of the
clothes stand
Because I always throw everything there.
這句沒有因果關係。
被講完了==
Wow!your room seems really messy.
I think "In this cabinet have my alarm clock, telephone, and some books etc."should be "There are ...."it seems better.
沒問題
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Wow!!There are many things in your room.
我覺得沒什麼問題
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